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GIVE A  BIG (THANK YOU!!) TO YOU our READERS for THEIR JUKEPOP JP30 Ribbon!!!!

I was presently surprised to see the JP30 ribbon this afternoon when I finally got home from work!! You guys made this happen and I am so thankful to each of you who took the time to read my serial/novel on JukePop. Thank you from the bottom of my heart!! Love you all!

BJHolder

Chapter Twelve is POSTED!!

Chapter 12 is posted and today’s writing was inspired by the following band: PHANTOGRAM. It is a bit longer than most all the other chapters and I’m not sure if that was due to the music or the chapter just had to be longer. I hope you enjoy it and today’s song. Also, sorry about the errors! I am sure it has several due to my eyes were starting to cross looking at it over and over. I will fix as some of you tell me, or if I catch them first.

“Black Out Days”

Hide the sun

I will leave your face out of my mind

You should save your eyes

A thousand voices howling in my head

Speak in tongues

I don’t even recognize your face

Mirror on the wall

Tell me all the ways to stay away

Ey ey ey ah

Away ey ah

Away ey ah

And stay

Away ey ah

Away ey ah

Away ey ah

Dig a hole

Fireworks exploding in my hands

If I could paint the sky

Would all the stars be shining bloody red?

Stay

Ey ey ey ah

Away ey ah

Away ey ah

And stay

Ey ey ey ah

Away ey ah

Away ey ah

And stay (I’m hearing voices all the time up in my mind)

Away ey ah

Away ey ah

Away ey ah (I’m hearing voices and they’re haunting my mind)

And stay (I’m hearing voices all the time up in my mind)

Away ey ah

Away ey ah

Away ey ah (I’m hearing voices and they’re haunting my mind)

Black out days

I don’t recognize you anymore end of lyrics

A song for when Logan and Gwyn get separated. Who Am I? by Vance Joy

 

Who Am I Lyrics: by Vance Joy

Hold me up to the light tell me

If the sun comes shining through
And I’ve got this heaviness in my chest
Since your love came breaking through

And I wanna know where it’s comin’ from
Where this is comin’ from
Where this is comin’ from
And I wanna know what you’re running from
What are you running from

Who am I? Who am I?
Without you? Without you?
Who am I? Who am I?
Without you? Without you?

Lay my dreams down at your feet
Baby watch out where you step
And there’s no need for us
Knowin’ all the answers yet

And I wanna know what you’re running from
What are you running from
What are you running from
And I wanna know where it’s comin’ from
Where this is comin’ from

Who am I? Who am I?
Without you? Without you?
Who am I? Who am I?
Without you? Without you?

You’re back for a minute and you’re gone
And I never know how close I came
You’re back for a minute and you’re gone
And I never know how close
You’re back for a minute and you’re gone
And I’ll never know how

Who am I? Who am I?
Without you? Without you?
Who am I? Who am I?
Without you? Without you?
Who am I? Who am I?
Without you? Without you?
Who am I?
Read more at http://www.songlyrics.com/vance-joy/who-am-i-lyrics/#RiBjSQQBfuZOH4Jf.99

+votes on JukePop

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Most of you know this, but it was brought to my attention yesterday some of you don’t. JukePop is all about helping writers  build an audience and one way they do it is with +votes. Voting shows your appreciation for which ever serial you are reading. If you like the story please remember to +vote. Not only does the writer move up in +votes but they also become eligible for cash awards. The Top 30 serials of each month are awarded. So if you like my Serial, Modified, please leave a comment or +vote. If you are shy +votes do not show who you are, it just helps out the Writer.

Thanks for listening to the public announcement! 🙂

BJHolder

Author of Modified, on JukePop

Chapter 11 is posted!

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(Everyone who knows me is in total agreement with above statement!)

I am patting myself on the back for this one. Not because it is the best chapter ever written, but because it exist at all… I am completely drained! It has been a go go go weekend. To be honest, I can’t believe I am writing this blog post. It’s a good thing I can type because my eyes are closed right now. I hope you enjoy it! Thanks again for reading!

BJHolder

Wordy, and I mean wordy…

600 words

Taking a little bit of a break this week since I busted out two chapters almost back to back. I love the response Modified is getting from you guys, makes me happy you like my story as much as I do, but after chapter ten I need a little break.

Most of my writing buddies are well into NaNo right now. NaNoWriMo means National Novel Writing Month for those of you who don’t write. I am sitting out on this due to the love Modified is getting. I would have to put it on hold to write another Novel in a months time.

Now that I have an excuse for sitting out on NaNoWriMo…

Next topic.

A friend of mine was talking with me yesterday about wordy authors. We discuss this topic a lot. It makes us skip over paragraphs at a time. I try hard to refrain from being over wordy, but it tends to happen. The above quote says it all. After looking through my own writing I am finding too many Had’s, and That’s. So I am going to take this opportunity to remove the words not needed in Modified. Soon, very soon, I hope!

Thanks for reading Modified! Talk to you soon!

BJHolder